Fangala the Flying Feline

Hi! It's my absolute pleasure to help you get published, so here we go: First, congratulations. It's difficult to tweak your reader's heartstrings in the first chapter, before we even ...

Oh. My. God. This is possibly the most darkly beautiful thing I have ever read on this site. You had me hooked from the first sentence and you didn't let ...

Great writing! It makes me curious what fantastical things are about to happen. And now, jumping straight into the critique: The sound of a buzzing alarm intruded on Alexia’s dream. ...

I can't believe no one's commented on this yet! I have absolutely nothing bad to say. The voice is so clear, the characterization so succinct--you've really nailed it. I adore ...

Ha! First to review! But hopefully not the first to be stunned. I mean, WOW. What a brilliant topic and execution. At first I thought this was yet another vampire ...

Yikes! What's with the bad reviews? I for one think this is really good. It's not tired and worn-out at all; it has a nice satirical ring, that's all. Very ...

First of all, thanks for saying that Chessie is the opposite of Bella. That was medicine for my soul. Now, onto your story: Excellent! You have a real talent for ...

Hi! Remember me? Your writing just keeps getting better and better. This piece is amazing. It pulled me along at breakneck speed, so when I reached the end it was ...

Another nice poem. You have a talent for setting up mood and atmosphere in a small amount of words. You also have lots of good subtle rhyme in here, like ...

Beautiful! In all my time on this site, I've never seen a poem with a picture, so congrats on originality! On to the crit: And electromagnetism Hisses vengefully As pines ...

Wow! Just when I thought vampires had become unbearably cliche, you pulled through and showed me something new. It's hilarious how the turning ceremony has a red carpet and everything, ...

Yes, a cat story! Love those. Good first sentence--very gripping. It pulled me in right away. The mouse chewed on, unaware of his presence Awkward sentence. I understand what you're ...

OH MY GOD! This is gorgeous! Without a doubt the BEST thing I have read for a LONG time. Your dialogue is flawlessly realistic and funny. Especially this: Druth made ...

Short indeed, but hey, intriguing nonetheless. Especially when you say "two different races". Since this is in the fantasy section, I'm thinking more like different species, but I guess I'll ...

Fabulous! marched over to the buffet style table, like I was walking a runway rather than in a shelter, hearing the satisfying click of my shoes, and the whispers of ...